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- Today is a special day that I had moved to San Francisco for four months. But now I am sad. Because my English level is not good enough to entered Uni here. I just got 19 on my English Joint College Entrance Exam in Taiwan. I am worry about it. And it is beginning to make me sick. I have no idea what to do . So can you give me some advice? Thanks a lot.
1. 第一句的部份是完成式，由於你現在還在舊金山，所以要用現在完成式have moved, 若是用had moved形成過去完成式意思是你曾經搬去舊金山四個月，而現在已經沒在那邊了。
2. 第二句的not good enough to後面應該加原形動詞enter, 另外university在網路上閒聊時才會寫成uni並且不會大寫，除非你指的是UNI(University of Northern Iowa)，所以還是要整個拼出來university，並且大學是可數的，所以要加冠詞a
3. 第四句“我只得到”應寫成I only got, 若是用I just got意思變成“我剛得到”
4. 第五句的我擔心應寫成I am worried about …
5. 倒數第三句It is beginning to…應寫成It begins to
所以整篇文章應該是
Today is a special day that I have moved to San Francisco for four months. But now I am sad because my English level is not good enough to enter a university here. I only got 19 on my English Joint College Entrance Exam in Taiwan. I am worried about it. And it begins to make me sick. I have no idea what to do. So can you give me some advice? Thanks a lot.