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Ruby  

• My name is Ruby.I am thir­teen years old.I am a girl.I am from Taiwan.My hob­by is play­ing bas­ket­ball and badminton.I am inter­est­ed in read­ing novel.I like a peace and qui­et place.I like fruit because is very yummy.And I favorite weath­er is sun­ny because I can play the sport love.This is my self introduction.

My name is Ruby. I am thir­teen years old. I am a girl from tai­wan. I am inter­est­ed in read­ing nov­els and I like peace and qui­et places. I like furit because they are yum­my. My favorite weath­er is sun­ny days because I can play every­thing I love, such as bad­minton, soc­cer, and bas­ket­ball. This is my self introduction. 
※斷句可以少一點，充分利用所學過的連接詞。
※寫的很順，good job!