- Dear Anna:
Long time no see from the last short passage i posted on 11 March. Now, i accomplish my first draft of essay, giving a hard copy to my teacher yesterday. A big relief of my pressure over the recent months comes from the moment i am writing on my conclusion remarks. Words fail to express
my feeling, but myself know that. It is life characteristic of challenges making people mature. Who is the people we shall salute to ? Mother, of course. Happy mother’s day.
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It is good to hear from you again^^
about the passage above, there are some “time things” need to be corrected and noticed.
2. giving不適合用在句中, 會感覺句子沒有完成, 所以第二句寫成這樣比較順: Now I accomplished the first draft of my essay and gave a hard copy to my teacher yesterday.
3. 第三段你是說從幾個月來寫結論當中釋放嗎??一下子現在簡單式一下子進行式, 可是你在描述的是過去的事情…你可以這樣寫 It’s a big relief for me since I have been working on the conclusion for months.
接下來的兩句可寫成 Words fail to express my feelings, but I know it is life character which makes people become mature.
4. 最後一句的add是動詞, 後面要接代名詞受格,所以要把my改成me
我發現你喜歡用動名詞, 這樣的話要先研究一下動名詞的用法和它擺放的位置喔!! 句子的時態非常重要, 時態不對會引起誤會喔!!