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• Dear annayeh or teacher:
  Thank for your kind encour­ag­ment and cor­rec­tion. Now, my con­fi­dence of Eng­lish shines again after receiv­ing my teacher’s letter,saying that much effort need­ed put on sen­tence struc­ture on Thurs­day. More impor­tant­ly, your feed­back toward the short pas­sage makes me dis­cov­ery the true weak­ness i have,chinese Eng­lish. ha ha. I was proud of Eng­lish abil­i­ty when i was in high school. Now, build­ing the brand­new con­fi­dence of Eng­lish emerges as the short-term goal i am going to real­ize. As a student,MBA degree, i study in Kaoh­si­ung. Nice to meet you. Thanks.<br />

  best regards,
  Hanst

hi Hanst, just call me Anna!!^^
i think your Eng­lish is good enough to com­mu­ni­cate with peo­ple, maybe your teacher wants you to be bet­ter because you are study­ing in MBA. now, about the pas­sage above, the only prob­lem is that in this fol­low­ing sen­tence, “build­ing the brand­new con­fi­dence of Eng­lish emerges as the short-term goal i am going to real­ize” if you can change the word “real­ize” to “reach” will be bet­ter. we reach goals, and real­ize some truth. and that’s all you need to cor­rect. keep going!!^^