Ruby 
- The winter is come.The wind also blew hard and made the windows sound scary.And I don’t like winter because is very cool. I usually catch a cold on cold days.But,it is very comfortable to go hiking on cool days.So,I hope every days is not cool.
Winter is coming. The wind blows hard and makes the windows sound scary. I don’t like winter because it is very cold. I usually catch a cold on cold days. But, it is very comfortable to go hiking on cold days. So I hope …
1. be+ving
2. 季節前不加冠詞
3. 最後兩句矛盾，意義不明