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Axon

  • Hi
    My name is Axon and I’m a new ESL stu­dent in CANADA. I need to improve my Eng­lish so that I can get used to this new envi­ron­ment as quick­ly as pos­si­ble. By the way, I’m from CHINA (MAINLAND) but I real­ly like Tai­wan. I like watch­ing your enter­tain­ing TV pro­gram and not so many gov­ern­men­t’s restrict bill makes Tai­wan more free than Main­land. I real­ly want­ed to learn more about your dif­fer­ent lifestyle. So, if you can help me with it and my Eng­lish. I’m appre­ci­ate that.

REPLY1你的英文使用的很好啊
該不會是愛看“康熙來了”!! 呵呵~
要注意的是在I real­ly want­ed 這裡不要用過去式,就直接I real­ly want to 就可以了,因為你是現在想,如果用wanted就變成以前想但現在不想了;最後一句appreciate已經是動詞,所以前面不用加be動詞;more free用freer會比較好,大概就這樣!這些都不會影響閱讀和理解,所以還好囉!
關於台灣,有機會的話來一趟吧^^