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  • Today my fam­i­ly went to restau­rant on the Father’s Day.We ate cabbage,rice,tofu and soup. It’s very good.I and Ruby stud­ied English.Today was very happy.

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Today I went to a restau­rant for Father’s Day with my fam­i­ly. We had cab­bage, rice, tofu and soup. I was good. Ruby and I also stud­ied Eng­lish. I am very happy.
前面在講父親節,後面突然冒出讀英文,會很唐突,所以句中加個also, 說明除了去餐廳之外,“也“讀了英文, 另外,請注意主詞的位置!!