Ruby 
- There are three people in my family;my father,my mother and I. I am the only child in my family.In my family, I love my mother best.And I love my puppy best because Dad and Mom do not have time to play with me.I hope my familycan live happily forever.
There are three people in my family–my fahter, my mother, and I. I am the only child in my family. I love my mom the best. And I also love my puppy because Dad and Mom do not have time to play with me. I hope my family can live together happily forever.
※重複的字句太多囉!!
※good job!