hanst

• At the end of March, the first draft of essay must be hand­ed in to the pro­fes­sor with­out delay. that’s a big chal­lenge for me,for the essay writ­ten in Eng­lish, which is my weak­ness from the begin­ning of the my born. Accord­ing to my friend, my sen­tence ought to be over­hauled. Not my struc­ture but the fun­da­men­tal gram­mar rule of Eng­lish. In view of this, i will prac­tice it more every­day. Thank you.Hanst

hi Hanst,

你文章寫的不錯啊!! 繼續加油!!

第二句那裡改成That’s a big chal­lenge for me, for the essay should be writ­ten in Eng­lish, and that has always been a prob­lem since the day I was born. 意思會比較清楚~不然會有中文英文的感覺~後面說從我出生那一天起對台灣人是覺得很幽默~well done! 其他的沒有什麼問題~加油囉!!;-)