hanst 
- At the end of March, the first draft of essay must be handed in to the professor without delay. that’s a big challenge for me,for the essay written in English, which is my weakness from the beginning of the my born. According to my friend, my sentence ought to be overhauled. Not my structure but the fundamental grammar rule of English. In view of this, i will practice it more everyday. Thank you.Hanst
hi Hanst,
你文章寫的不錯啊!! 繼續加油!!
第二句那裡改成That’s a big challenge for me, for the essay should be written in English, and that has always been a problem since the day I was born. 意思會比較清楚~不然會有中文英文的感覺~後面說從我出生那一天起對台灣人是覺得很幽默~well done! 其他的沒有什麼問題~加油囉!!;-)
