初級寫作修改-022

Ruby  

• The school start,I am very hap­py because I can read the book in the library,and I can do a lot of things that I like. But,I don’t like home­work or prac­tice musi­cal instru­ment. So, I like go to school.

1. 開學了，學校要用三單現
2. 看書不是只看一本或是指定哪一本，所以用複數，並且強調是學校的圖書館
3. 我不喜歡做作業“和“練習樂器，注意連接詞，而且對等連接詞要注意兩邊的詞性要相同
4. 最後一句很矛盾，搞不清楚到底喜歡還是不喜歡?
The school starts, I am very hap­py because I can read a lot of books in the school library. Also, I can do a lot of things that I like. But, I don’t like doing home­work and prac­tic­ing musi­cal instru­ments. I still like to go to school most of the time.