初級寫作修改-020

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• The weater is cold,because the win­ter is come.November,December and Jan­u­ary are in the winter.I like Christ­mas Day in December,because I have gifts.And I also like Chi­nese New Year in the January.Many mon­ey are in red package.I can become rich.It’s hap­py. I wish Tai­wan can snow,but it can’t.

The weath­er is cold because win­ter is com­ing. Novem­ber, Decem­ber and Jan­u­ary are in win­ter. I like Christ­mas in Decem­ber because I always have gifts at Christ­mas. And I also like Chi­nese New Year in Jan­u­ary. Much mon­ey will be in red envelopes for me so I can be rich for a while. Being rich makes me so hap­py. I wish it can snow in Tai­wan in win­ter, but it can’t.

1. be+ving

2. 季節前不加冠詞

3. on Christ­mas day 是在聖誕節那一天, at Christmas是在整個十二月聖誕節的期間

4. 紅包叫做red enve­lope, 錢money不可數

5. 注意地方副詞和時間副詞的位置，一般時間副詞在句子最後方，地方副詞在時間副詞之前